What do you think of the beginning of my story?

I completely disagree about giving your age. Writing changes with time. I wanted to tell you that you have an enormous writing talent. I am 55 years old, yet your story kept my attention. It made me wish I could read more of it. I do not agree with all criticisms in the one letter. That person should be reading your story on YOUR level. I knew the moment I read it, that you have a very promising future. My criticism would be your use of the word "terror" so soon in your story. Terror is a very strong word. I thought she was sitting in a tree to escape some horrible, menacing creature on the ground. If she is terrified that she will never escape her life of poverty and drudgery, that word could be used much later... perhaps as a response to a nightmare. I believe I am well-qualified to critique your story. You'd be surprised... Please don't stop. Be very careful about putting your writing on here and asking opinions. We writers are very sensitive, and the other letter can crush the life out of a young and promising writer. I know from whence I speak. I am forced to write to you from my phone, or I would say more. For your age, you have displayed a brilliant ability to write. Congratulations and keep at it. Pay close attention in your English classes. You are going to get better and better. I promise.

How to tell your parents you have your very first boyfriend?

haha i wouldn't be worried at all..if you say its not a big deal to them then just tell them now! its not like you're gonna do anything wrong with him anyway... keeping it a secret until it gets more serious wouldn't be a bad thing either...i'd be nervous to tell my parents i was dating the baddest guy with the worse reputation but you have NOTHING to worry about!! good luck!

How does sodium nitrate make soil alkaline?

Our lecturer told us that when Sodium Nitrate is added as a strait fertilizer the soil becomes alkaline with time. How does this happen? She didn't give any explanation and asked us to find out. So far I had no luck with it. The possible answer I've found is that Nitrate turns to nitrite , then nitrite reacts with water to give HNO2 and H+. But I'm not sure whether thats entirely right. Help!

Can you get your pilot's license and pass your medical exam if you have Severe food allergies?

I have severe food allergies, enough where my allergist requires me to carry an Epi-Pen and Benadryl as a back-up. I only ever use these medications if I come into a food that I am not supposed to eat, as I am not allergic to any environmental substances. Benadryl, I am sure you know is a medication that makes you a little drowsy, however it really doesn't make me really all that drowsy. EpiPens, if used, you are required to go to the hospital. Since I am required to carry these, and because of the way they react and the way you have to react to the medications, I am wondering, are these a disqualification to getting my medical and student pilot license? Thanks! :)

Good degree to become a cop?...?

Good for you you for choosing an academic major rather than "criminal justice." Sociology, anthropology, philosophy, history, etc. are all good choices.

How woul you feel/react if you were eminems dad?

ok so in alot of eminems songs he talks shi t about his dad and how much he hates him. how would you feel if you were his dad. and eminem still hasnt ever met his dad

Amusement Park Hair Style? ?

Ok, naturaly straight hair, i dont look good with pony tails or pigtails or buns or braids. I need help plz and thnk you.